Friday, 10 April 2020

Blessed Freedom

Blessed Freedom 


You self-obsessed, you ego-centric
You unpredictable, you narcissistic
You expensive, you majestic
You lordly, you hubristic

Still this trivial die to shade tears for you

You longed for freedom out of heaven
She opened up the doors of heaven
You hauled the flames of your mean hell
She didn’t effort to snuff out your sparkle

Still this trivial die to shade tears for you

You disparaged this wild dot in your life
Who had the power to crown your existence
Whose devotion would have been created you
But you were fast enough to destroy her soul

Still this trivial die to shade tears for you

She mediocre, she miserable
She flawed, yet she selfless
She got the real freedom out of your hellfire
But you lost kingdom of her passionate paradise

You deserve mercy my dear
Her intellect
Die to shade tears for you



13 comments:

Faheem said...

What is the theme?

Whom you're targeting here?

Muniza Khan said...

some people lose precious things without even knowing ...
they feel themselves superior with out knowing that they are nothing and due to this pride they lose the beautiful parts of their lives

Muniza Khan said...

normally all the people who are of this sort

Faheem said...

Normally how long you take to write such things?

Faheem said...

Concept is realistic and beautifully composed πŸ‘ŒπŸ»

Muniza Khan said...

Including disturbance and all it takes maximum of 1 or 1 n half hour

Muniza Khan said...

thank you so much..your appreciation means a lot

Faheem said...

Maa Sha Allah

God's gifted talent

Muniza Khan said...

thank you so much

Oenophile said...

Masha Allah

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Atif khan said...

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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